1. Have the lightbox title text be more readable. Right now it is white on whatever is on the page.
2. Have the call to action at the bottom of the page favor the sign up process. I would reuse the green button from the top of the page and leave the "learn more" link as text.
3. The email based integration feature is fairly meaningless on its own. It is redundant if it is covered 3 items down with "Alerts via phone call, SMS, and email" I would personally cull out the overlap and have just a few key features on the right. Really only put the stellar features that you offer.
4. To keep the logo more web 2.0 like the rest of your interface I would have the text framed in what looks like a pager but make the pager look 2.0ish.
Overall it looks as if this might be successful. I am not really in the market for it but I could see some smaller businesses jumping on board.
1. Have the lightbox title text be more readable. Right now it is white on whatever is on the page.
2. Have the call to action at the bottom of the page favor the sign up process. I would reuse the green button from the top of the page and leave the "learn more" link as text.
3. The email based integration feature is fairly meaningless on its own. It is redundant if it is covered 3 items down with "Alerts via phone call, SMS, and email" I would personally cull out the overlap and have just a few key features on the right. Really only put the stellar features that you offer.
4. To keep the logo more web 2.0 like the rest of your interface I would have the text framed in what looks like a pager but make the pager look 2.0ish.
Overall it looks as if this might be successful. I am not really in the market for it but I could see some smaller businesses jumping on board.