Do you disagree with any of the data or conclusions?

I must admit, the fact that the writing was well formatted and structured was an instant turn off. I did find it insightful. I would have been more willing to read it if it was one lower case run on line with typos one would expect from a prepubescent child. I am both joking and being serious at the same time. What a world.

Yes

I'm open to hearing, please elaborate

It's only slop if it's wrong or irrelevant.